Perfectly Poetical: triolet
Today's poetry challenge at The Little Stuff of Life was to write a triolet--a type of poem with a tight rhyme scheme and repeated lines. I've always wanted to write a villanelle, a type of poetry that also has repeated lines and a tight rhyme scheme, but never managed. The triolet is shorter--perhaps it'll be my warm-up for a villanelle someday? Here's what I got out of it, anyway.


See links to more triolets at The Little Stuff of Life.

Blowing wishes away
Standing in the grass, blowing wishes away
What if she wants them back?
Why can't she hold them close, for a rainy day?
Leaping through the grass, blowing wishes away
Wide eyes glow as they fly where they may
The magic’s in not keeping track
Standing in the grass, blowing wishes away
She doesn’t want them back.

See links to more triolets at The Little Stuff of Life.

2 comments:
Such a very sweet poem! Thanks for joining in!
Whimsical and sweet! I love it!
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